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brush & verse's avatar

Beautiful

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genie’s writing room 🥀's avatar

i love how your short and sweet sentences reel readers in!

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Dakkota Lane's avatar

Thank you 💕

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Colman Corrigan's avatar

Very nice work! A real haunting quality in the prose/imagery/format.

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Dakkota Lane's avatar

Thank you so much. I’m really drawn to that haunting edge in storytelling, so I’m glad it came through for you. Grateful you took the time to read it. 🖤

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tainted's messy mind's avatar

so beautiful and rlly pretty to look at too, keep writing keep going !

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Dakkota Lane's avatar

Thank you 😊

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celina!'s avatar

loveeee this wow ❤️‍🩹

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Dakkota Lane's avatar

Thank you Celina💕

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selene's avatar

Absolutely enchanting. Your phrases aren't just sentences, but spells ✨🍂

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Brady Knipp's avatar

loved the line "But everything is louder here. The birds. The grass. My heart." Really captures that gut wrenching feeling of a place so full of memories that it can be overwhelming to the senses.

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